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Crush on You - A Short Story by ~DeadlyVampireUnicorn:iconDeadlyVampireUnicorn:



I heard the snap an instant before the sharp pain of a rubber-band hit the back of my head.
On instinct, I reached up and grasped at the projectile, pulling the offending object out of my hair. I blinked in confusion at the neon pink band laying oh-so innocently in my palm. Then, with a moment’s more hesitation, I turned my head slowly and peered behind me, searching subtlety for the shooter.
My heart skipped a beat when I found him, sitting in the back of the class room, a catty grin on his lips.  He was staring at me, his sharp-green eyes narrowed mischievously, and he waggled his fingers in mock-greeting when he saw me looking. A couple of snickers came from those of his friends surrounding him, and my face flushed red.
I faced the front of the classroom stiffly, bitting my lip and desperately trying to hide the spreading blush behind a curtain of my honey-brown hair. Another muffled snort came from behind me, and it was all I could do not to hunch my shoulders and to sink down in my seat.
A few moments later, and I felt the sting of another rubber-band. I did not turn around, forcing myself to nash my teeth and endure it, and to try and pay attention to the words the teacher was speaking at the front of the classroom.
There was a sound of desks moving and a couple of scuffling footsteps, and I heard a low chuckle sound from behind me as I stiffened to the tapping of a finger on my shoulder. My eyes darted to the teacher, who still droned endlessly on, oblivious to the switching of the seating order of her class. I sighed inwardly, and turned my head just slightly enough to see the person out of the corner of my eye, hoping to keep my expression bland and dispassionate. If only the flame in my cheeks would fade away, then maybe I might have a chance of achieving this.
It was the same boy from before, the shooter, still wearing that cocky smile and staring at me with those jealousy-green colored eyes. His head was tilted and with the hand that was poised as if ready to tap me again, he held a fistful of neon-colored rubber-bands.
“Hey, new-girl,” he whispered. “You’re cute.”
I stared at him. I stared at the piercing on his lip, the stud in his eyebrow, the dark, spiking black locks that were tipped in electric blue and stuck out in all directions. I stared at his pale hands, fingers tipped with shiny-black nail polish, and decorated with pewter colored rings. I stared at his black, ripped and torn t-shirt, his mesh sleeves, and his black bracelets and writs-bands. I stared at his nose. I stared at his forehead. I stared at his ears.
I looked anywhere but his eyes.
“I...I...” My voice stuttered, and a new flush was spreading across my pale skin.
“Aw.” The green-eyed shooter’s lips quirked up even more into a grin. “I think the cute new-girl has a crush on me.” Sarcastic snorts from around us told me that the statement was not directed towards me, and he glanced around the room with what looked like contempt. But then he was looking back at me, the devilry all too clear in his black-lashed, green eyes.
“Do you have a crush on me, new-girl?”
He leaned closer, close enough so that I could feel his lips against my ear as he whispered:
“’Cause I think I have a crush on you, cute new-girl.”
:icondeadlyvampireunicorn:

Author's Comments

Another short story I wrote over the trip (the reason that I do not have that many is because I forgot my computers plug in chord, and so I could only use it for a couple of hours on an EIGHT DAY CRUISE. It was wack. :XD:)
Anyways, the inspiration for this was a rubber band I was wearing around my wrist. I know, I'm weird. Hope you like!

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:iconelveprincess:
super cute! I loved it!
'jealousy-green colored eyes'
great bit.

Peace.
The ElvePrincess

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The People You Love, Are the Ones You Can Hurt the Most
:iconniyol612:
AAAh sooooooo CUTE I love it write more write more
:icondeadlyvampireunicorn:
thank you!
'more' is not a word in my vocabulary...:XD:

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...Sweet like a taste of blood red wine.
Lovely like death in the moonlight's shine.
Drawn from the shadows, color me sinned.
Murder like an angel with a grim-grin...


-Erin
:icondeadlyvampireunicorn:
it was the only word i could think of. D
glad you loved it though.:hug:

DVU

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...Sweet like a taste of blood red wine.
Lovely like death in the moonlight's shine.
Drawn from the shadows, color me sinned.
Murder like an angel with a grim-grin...


-Erin
:iconspartan301:
i'sent that the second time you have been inspired by some thing around you wrist?

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i am the phantom of foundry
fear me :evillaugh:
i am canadian!!!!!!!!!!!!:flagcanada:
game tag:TRIGGERHAPPY301
someone tag me im BORED!!
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:iconnaruhina25:
that was sweet! i think u shud continue it! it was a little mean how it seemed he was makin fun of her at first, tho...
:icondeadlyvampireunicorn:
lolz, i know! he's a total jerk. Arrogant because he knows he's hot stuff, and he thinks that he can have any girl in the school if he really wanted to; kind of the quarter back gone preppy boy gone punk. :XD:

--
...Sweet like a taste of blood red wine.
Lovely like death in the moonlight's shine.
Drawn from the shadows, color me sinned.
Murder like an angel with a grim-grin...


-Erin
:icondeadlyvampireunicorn:
....yes. :XD:

--
...Sweet like a taste of blood red wine.
Lovely like death in the moonlight's shine.
Drawn from the shadows, color me sinned.
Murder like an angel with a grim-grin...


-Erin
:iconnaruhina25:
u shud continue it, you seem 2 b rlly into it, y'no?

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