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I Have Problems - S.S. by ~DeadlyVampireUnicorn:iconDeadlyVampireUnicorn:



“So...” he scratched the back of his neck awkwardly, averting his eyes from her own. “You like me, huh?”
She nodded, her dark curls bobbing with the movement. He smirked, and looked at her out of the corner of his eye.
“Well, that’s interesting.”
She bit her lip, wondering what he meant by that. Was interesting good? Or was it...not so good?
The girl reached up to play with a lock of her hair, a nervous habit. The boy’s smile widened, and he shifted so that now his body was turned towards her.
They were both silent for a moment, both watching each other; his grey eyes were locked on her blue ones. A small grin played on the edge of his lips.
Then he whispered, “I bet you’re wondering what I mean by that.”
She opened her mouth to say something back, but then thought better of it and meekly nodded her head.
His grin widened.
“If that’s the case then, I’ll tell you.” Holding up exactly two fingers, his smile gone a little crooked, he said, “There are actually two things. One, I find it interesting that you like me because, to put it bluntly, I like you too.”
The girl inhaled softly, the flutter in her heart turning quickly into a lead weight, as she worried over what he was going to say next.
“And really, the second thing is only...” he said, pausing only to glance out the coffee shop’s window, at a couple passing by, holding hands on the New York street. “...I’m interested in seeing if you can still like me if I tell you about my...problem.”
“Problem?” she echoed, her tone expressing vapid bewilderment.
“Yes,” he said, nodding gravely. “I have problems. Many of them, actually. But I think you can handle most of them. It’s just one problem, really, that I think you might have some troubles coping with.”
She swallowed. “Um. Ok. What...is, ah, your....problem?”
He smiled sweetly then, resting his chin in the palm of his hand and looking at her through his lashes.
“You look nervous. It’s really nothing.” He reached over to trail a finger down the side of her face. “I just like to kill people, that’s all.”
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Author's Comments

I guess I'm on a killing story spree. *shrug* But yeah....I was just kinda going back through my few horrors, and thought, 'wow, i have problems...hey, i could use that in a horror story...'
there's actually not too much horror; it's more of a random weirdness. but whatevs. =D

Lucky Charms and Meese.

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:iconmusic1211:
haha..i really liked reading these :]
it was an interesting twist :P
does that make me a little wrong in the head too. lol
:iconstuartsonlygirl:
:rofl:
Loooooovvvvveee it!
I think this made my day, it'd be pretty cool, to trust her enough to tel her that. He's like the perfect boy friend.. almost.. :XD:
:icondarthbuttercup:
She seems like the kind to NOT survive if he attacked her.
But I love this. It makes me smile.

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~"Be gone, if you be not deathless! For living or dark undead, I will smite you, if you touch him." – Eowyn
~"Close your cowardly lips over that void in your head where your brains went missing and keep them there." – Lord Aquitaine
:iconspartan301:
now that is a problum

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i am the phantom of foundry
fear me :evillaugh:
i am canadian!!!!!!!!!!!!:flagcanada:
game tag:TRIGGERHAPPY301
someone tag me im BORED!!
opa
:iconspartan301:
problem*
my bad

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i am the phantom of foundry
fear me :evillaugh:
i am canadian!!!!!!!!!!!!:flagcanada:
game tag:TRIGGERHAPPY301
someone tag me im BORED!!
opa
:iconally0994:
for some reason i smile when I read these short murder(related) stories XD I'm a weird one, aren't I?

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\"If you can\'t solve the puzzle, you\'re nothing but a loser.\" ~ Nate River

"It's about time somebody scored around here!"
~~Emmet Cullen

Avatar by ~Deleterial
:icondeadlyvampireunicorn:
Yay! We're in the same boat then. =D

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...Sweet like a taste of blood red wine.
Lovely like death in the moonlight's shine.
Drawn from the shadows, color me sinned.
Murder like an angel with a grim-grin...


-Erin
:icondeadlyvampireunicorn:
LOLZ a problem I wouldn't really mind having...(jk...maybe)

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...Sweet like a taste of blood red wine.
Lovely like death in the moonlight's shine.
Drawn from the shadows, color me sinned.
Murder like an angel with a grim-grin...


-Erin
:icondeadlyvampireunicorn:
Probably not. But he likes her, so he probably won't...
Omigawsh, yay!! thank you, amiga. =D

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...Sweet like a taste of blood red wine.
Lovely like death in the moonlight's shine.
Drawn from the shadows, color me sinned.
Murder like an angel with a grim-grin...


-Erin

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