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I'm Going to Kill You - S.S. by ~DeadlyVampireUnicorn:iconDeadlyVampireUnicorn:



“I’m going to kill you,” he said to the frightened child.  His voice was cold and uncaring, and as cruel as the smile on his face. Deranged eyes with dilated pupils crinkled at the edges as he watched the little boy shudder in fear. A sick happiness spread through him, and as he twirled the pocket knife in his hand, the man sighed.
“I’m going to kill you,” the man whispered again, wondering if his words would evoke more of the boy’s thrilling terror. “I’m going to kill you, I’m going to kill you. I’m going to kill you.”
He lunged forward, a wild laugh in his throat as the knife came down, repeatedly, over and over again. Blood was everywhere; streaks of it across the white walls and the beige carpet. The afternoon sun shone through the red-splattered glass, the crimson rays landing on the mutilated corpse of a twelve-year-old boy, and his heavily-breathing murderer.
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Author's Comments

Yup. There's definitely something wrong with my brain...but whatevs. =D
I think this piece is asi-asi, not too bueno, but not terrible either.
(Right...I'm trying to work some Spanish into my vocabulary...otherwise I'm going to fail.)

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:iconhotbloodedfemale:
...are you ok hun? Anything you wanna talk about XD

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There's truth in your lies and doubt in your faith ~ Linkin Park

:floating: I told him I was scared of falling...but he whispered, don't worry, I have wings. :floating:
:iconstuartsonlygirl:
What do you have against 12 year boys? :XD:
:iconspartan301:
holy crap that was dark the worst part was you described it so good

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i am the phantom of foundry
fear me :evillaugh:
i am canadian!!!!!!!!!!!!:flagcanada:
game tag:TRIGGERHAPPY301
someone tag me im BORED!!
opa
:iconiwriteanddraw93:
Dude.....awesome! Just awesome! *claps*

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Nami: "Anyways, let's think back on the information on The Golden City that we read in Norland's diary!"
Luffy: "Ooh me! He saw gold!"
Usopp: "DUH, MORON!"

XD One Piece(C)Oda
:iconally0994:
My head is messed up. This made me smile. AGAIN. Goddammit. XD

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\"If you can\'t solve the puzzle, you\'re nothing but a loser.\" ~ Nate River

"It's about time somebody scored around here!"
~~Emmet Cullen

Avatar by ~Deleterial
:icondeadlyvampireunicorn:
ROFL that's fine actually; i couldn't stop cracking up when i re-read it. Especially at the 'i'm going to kill you' parts. :XD:

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...Sweet like a taste of blood red wine.
Lovely like death in the moonlight's shine.
Drawn from the shadows, color me sinned.
Murder like an angel with a grim-grin...


-Erin
:icondeadlyvampireunicorn:
yay!! :glomp: :hug:

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...Sweet like a taste of blood red wine.
Lovely like death in the moonlight's shine.
Drawn from the shadows, color me sinned.
Murder like an angel with a grim-grin...


-Erin
:icondeadlyvampireunicorn:
ROFL you know what's also great? my friend told me I just described kinda what my own living room looks like that...mmm. That's now my fave room in the house...:XD:)

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...Sweet like a taste of blood red wine.
Lovely like death in the moonlight's shine.
Drawn from the shadows, color me sinned.
Murder like an angel with a grim-grin...


-Erin

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