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In the field I watched,
As the moon shined upon all.
Waiting for my chance in the world.
“Mind if I join you?”
Came the voice of a boy,
Who stood with the right of the way.
I nodded my head,
As the boy came to lay by my side.
Taking my hand,
He turned his face to mine,
And with the words that he said:
“We shall wait together,
To show this world of ours.
Our power,
Our strength,
And how we do so belong.”
A tear ran it’s course,
And the boy kissed it away.
When I looked in his eyes,
I saw the ghost of a dream,
That longed to live free,
Twisted with mine.
And beneath the light of the moon,
I kissed that boy,
Before turning back to the sky.
The boy turned with me,
And we watched.
So expectantly we waited together,
For our chance in the world.
:icondeadlyvampireunicorn:

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Hmm...this came out while i was trying to start a request....I'm not exactly sure, but....i think this might actually have a meaning behind it's words...o.o;
XD

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:iconiwriteanddraw93:
Awesome. A very powerful poem. :D

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Nami: "Anyways, let's think back on the information on The Golden City that we read in Norland's diary!"
Luffy: "Ooh me! He saw gold!"
Usopp: "DUH, MORON!"

XD One Piece(C)Oda
:icondeadlyvampireunicorn:
thank you! i usually don't write poetry like this...you know, where it kinda makes sense...:XD:

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...Sweet like a taste of blood red wine.
Lovely like death in the moonlight's shine.
Drawn from the shadows, color me sinned.
Murder like an angel with a grim-grin...


-Erin
:iconiwriteanddraw93:
I never write any poems that make sense. They are pretty much random.

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Nami: "Anyways, let's think back on the information on The Golden City that we read in Norland's diary!"
Luffy: "Ooh me! He saw gold!"
Usopp: "DUH, MORON!"

XD One Piece(C)Oda
:icondeadlyvampireunicorn:
:XD: randomness is a virtue...:XD:

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...Sweet like a taste of blood red wine.
Lovely like death in the moonlight's shine.
Drawn from the shadows, color me sinned.
Murder like an angel with a grim-grin...


-Erin
:iconlaffytaffy5:
this is amazing! the word choice is great and the flow to it is perfect. great job! and i like the idea to this one too.

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I Make My Hearts With Wings Because They Have A Tendancy To Fly Away.
:icondeadlyvampireunicorn:
YAY! thank you! i think this is one of the first poems that acutally kinda makes some tiny bit of sense. =D

--
...Sweet like a taste of blood red wine.
Lovely like death in the moonlight's shine.
Drawn from the shadows, color me sinned.
Murder like an angel with a grim-grin...


-Erin
:iconlaffytaffy5:
psht this isn't the first one they all have made perfect sense!

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I Make My Hearts With Wings Because They Have A Tendancy To Fly Away.
:icondeadlyvampireunicorn:
glad they did to you. :XD: i couldn't tell the end from start on some of them...:XD:
:glomp:

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...Sweet like a taste of blood red wine.
Lovely like death in the moonlight's shine.
Drawn from the shadows, color me sinned.
Murder like an angel with a grim-grin...


-Erin
:iconcanniblisticskunk:
I absolutely love this to DEATH! It's soo cute. Good job.

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every time i dress up as a skunk....i EAT RAINBOWS!
Dear Stranger, will you join me in this dance under this brilliant lightening storm?
I don't fall in love with eyes nor bodies, I fall in love with souls.
He makes the lights dance!

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